Tag: Writing

Poetry | Literacy

We have been doing poetry and in poetry we have been making poems, one of them is the haiku and tanka poem which is quite easy just need to think of something and write about it like trucks for example. I will give you the link but this is just one of them.

Haiku 

Trucks are really fast

Trucks are really cool and fast

Trucks re really cool

TANKA

Trucks are really cool

Trucks are speedy and fast

Trucks can rev their engines loud

Trucks are amazing they’re cool

Renewable Energy

We are doing research into renewable energy.

What is renewable energy? 

Renewable energy is a energy that is derived from natural sources that are consumed but are replenished faster then they are consumed which is a renewable resource, wind and sunlight, for example, are such sources that are constantly being replenished. Renewable energy sources are plentiful and all around us.

 

What are some renewable energy sources?

  • Wind power – Comes from the power of the wind and turns it into energy (windmills)
  • Solar – Comes the sunlight (solar panels)
  • Hydropower – Uses the falling or fast-running water

Climate change essay

I have been doing a climate change essay which is so far going well but could be better but is enough. I like what I have so far but it is not enough.

Here is a little bit of what I am writing in the essay. The yellow represents the main point of the paragraph and the green is just part of the yellow but going into the information of it. This term we just did part of it but next term we are going to do all of it. Once I do all of my essay I will put it on my blog so you can read if you want but no promises because I don’t know if I will or not.

 

The Portal

I made a story about a kid at his aunts farm she has one rule that is to never go outside the stone walls and he does not listen to it because he had done all the stuff you could do there and he finds a sliver locket between some rocks and takes it back to his room and after prying it and portal appears and sucks him into it he wakes up to see a cow and sheep standing over him just to find that they could talk and their is a wizard so he sets out.  I have not got into some of the main story and will not update if no support.

 

I was spending my holiday at my aunt’s place helping the farm because her farm animals was disappearing it was not like a cash cow was here buying them. I was in the middle of nowhere but that is fine because there is lots to do but she has one rule that is not to go outside the stone walls. I was going to listen but I had done all the stuff she had but she did not say that I could explore the wall so as I was walking I saw a sliver locket nestled between some rocks I grabbed it after a little bit I did not find anything so I grabbed the sliver locket and ran as fast as I could go I felt like a cheetah but I stopped like I was just walking because I heard footsteps. 

 

I quietly started to run after I got home I took out the locket from my jacket I started to pry it open with all my struggled I had just got it open when a portal appeared and was starting to suck me in I struggled to stay but the strange force was increasing  with each second I bolted to the door as fast as lightning when I reached the door I felt my feet give way I reached for the door but I slowly started to move back toward the portal I struggled with all my might but it was not doing a thing just as I stepped the defeat I saw a cow with a sheep standing over me “aaaahhhhh!” I had screamed like at little child so loud I did know was possible for me. “Calm down I am not going to hurt you” the cow said, I was more scared that a cow could speak and I ended up fainting because of fear. A while later he had woke up it was just a dream he said in his mind it was not a cow who was speaking and talked like a human he was just having dreams of cows and sheep it was normal “am I really a dream” that voice echoed in the room. “Who are you” I said “I am the lamb of god” “to get eaten then why don’t you go to the butcher” “it means I am the pet of god” after the argument I felt the feeling of homesickness. With that my new goal was to go home and see my mother and father.

 

(Two hours later)

 

You could see a 15 year old trying to get out of the house without getting detected by the sheep, he felt like he was as visible as a atom after a little bit of sneaking around he got out of the house he ran to a person or you could call them a cow person, he went and asked if you knew how to get out of this place “No one does” his face darkened he was starting to get hopeless when he heard “but I know the wizard of the tower might” his face looked like his favourite desert was placed in front of him and for free. He suddenly realised  that she said wizard not old man. So after a little he decide to gather a team.

 

 The end

Metaphors

Two days ago (Tuesday) we did some writing about metaphors and the difference between a metaphors and simile e.g a simile is comparison but using word, like, as. A metaphor is a comparison without those words. We did 5 sentences with the metaphors and had to choose from them my metaphors are:

  •  I looked at my parents with the emotion of the apple of my eye. 
  • It looked like the snow was a white blanket.
  • I was sitting on the ground and my tears were a river. 
  • I usually look at the stars but today the stars were dancing.
  • The rocks were like my heart of stone.

All the one I could choose from are these:

  1. A heart of stone
  2. That place is a zoo
  3. It is a melting pot.
  4. The apple of my eye
  5. The snow is a white blanket
  6. The tears were a river
  7. The stars are dancing
  8. You are my sun
  9. The lightning creates fireworks
  10. Just a band-aid for the problem

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