Persuasive writing

We are learning about persuasive writing. In this paragraph. I use pros and cons and statistics.

Why we should get rid of all money. Money does give people houses but it also takes away like if you meet a homeless person it would be they are poor or got kicked out by a bank who has lots of money but if you were to get rid of money people would be more happy like people focus more on their goals like being a physicist or teacher. It would get rid of scammers and businesses would be more open to the public and not betray others. Also money is bad for people as it made Over 420,000 people in problem debt consider taking their own life in England each year and it could keep rising with the recent problems.

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